Overall, the changes that I plan to make were agreed with. There were points made about some possible biased sources that I will continue to look into to avoid the use of such sources. After receiving this feedback, I have decided to entirely revamp the “History” section of the article. Currently, it is not history, and is all direct quotes. I plan on paraphrasing these quotes, and moving this section to a new section that is all about the actual goals of the Brazil Without Homophobia project. I also plan on linking more related articles in the text of my article, making sure that this article is no longer an “orphan.” The feedback that I received will help me to make my article more concise, give more information, and be formatted in a more clear way.